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Cut

Publicado: Mié, 19 Jun 2013 10:01
por E. R. Aristy
CUT

Los monstruos son creados iguales.
Cubiertos con el soberbio traje de los ideales,
en tu hora negra, sus ojos brillan
como puñales.

E. R. Aristy

re: CUT

Publicado: Mié, 19 Jun 2013 12:08
por Concha Vidal
Fuerte, ¿doloroso? impactante.

Un abrazo siempre.

re: CUT

Publicado: Mié, 19 Jun 2013 12:38
por Nésthor Olalla
"Los monstruos son creados iguales,
Cubiertos con el soberbio traje de los ideales"



No sé cómo nombrarlos, pero existen; en el frío se dejan ver bramando con ferocidad sus indescifrables credos.


Un gusto siempre pasar por lo tuyo, compañera.<xml><o></o>

Publicado: Mié, 19 Jun 2013 19:31
por Guillermo Cumar.
Tu corto se comporta como la respuesta a un acertijo, amiga.
Todos no son imaginarios. Me refiero a los monstruos.

un abrazo
gg

Publicado: Mié, 19 Jun 2013 20:19
por Isabel Moncayo
Estos poemas tuyos "chiquitos" encierran verdades descomunales, querida Era,

Un beso.

Publicado: Jue, 20 Jun 2013 13:23
por Macedonio Tracel
me gusta el poema, me gusta el título y el manejo que tenés de estas grajeas ominosas. nada de reberverancia japonesa. un impacto directo, una nota súbita, veloz y distorcionada

re: CUT

Publicado: Jue, 20 Jun 2013 17:43
por Pilar Morte
Corto pero impactante, un placer
Besos
Pilar

Publicado: Jue, 20 Jun 2013 21:08
por Marius Gabureanu
Creo que el poema es una forma de desprecio tambien. Los monstruos son creados iguales, esta sentencia limita las energías negativas, las pone bajo el candado de una verdad indiscutible. Me ha gustado mucho, E.R.A.

Mis abrazos y felicitaciones.

Re: CUT

Publicado: Jue, 20 Jun 2013 22:36
por Begoña Egüen
E. R. Aristy escribió:CUT

Los monstruos son creados iguales,
Cubiertos con el soberbio traje de los ideales,
En tu hora negra, sus ojos brillan
Como puñales.

E. R. Aristy
¡Impactante poema!!!.. Felicidades y gracias por haber compartido.
Un beso.
BEGOÑA.

Publicado: Vie, 21 Jun 2013 3:24
por Josefa A. Sánchez
Y sin palabras...
Un abrazo.
Pepa

re: CUT

Publicado: Vie, 21 Jun 2013 3:52
por Óscar Distéfano
Tu talento para la condensación poética es enorme. Este poema corto es toda una alegoría de la vida misma. Yo, incluso, tengo monstruos que ya me ha apuñalado.
¿Qué es CUT?

Un enorme placer es leerte, Roxane, poeta de la hondura.
Óscar

Publicado: Vie, 21 Jun 2013 11:31
por Carlos Justino Caballero
E. R. Aristy, Una inmensa brevedad. Mis congratulaciones, ERA

Publicado: Vie, 21 Jun 2013 16:24
por Ramón Carballal
Desde luego que es unpoema impactante, y lo que más inquieta es que tiene su poso de verdad. Enhorabuena y un abrazo.

re: CUT

Publicado: Jue, 22 Ago 2013 3:58
por E. R. Aristy
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For the verb: "to cut"
[TABLE][TR][TD]Simple Past:[/TD][TD]cut[/TD][/TR][TR][TD]Past Participle:[/TD][TD]cut[/TD][/TR][/TABLE]
Collins Concise English Dictionary © HarperCollins Publishers::

cut
/kʌt
/

vb (
cuts
,
cutting
,
cut
)
  1. to open up or incise (a person or thing) with a sharp edge or instrument; gash
  2. (of a sharp instrument) to penetrate or incise (a person or thing)
  3. to divide or be divided with or as if with a sharp instrument
  4. (intransitive)
    to use a sharp-edged instrument or an instrument that cuts
  5. (transitive)
    to trim or prune by or as if by clipping
  6. (transitive)
    to reap or mow (a crop, grass, etc)
  7. (transitive)
    sometimes followed by
    out:
    to make, form, or shape by cutting
  8. (transitive)
    to hollow or dig out; excavate
  9. to strike (an object) sharply
  10. to hit (the ball) to the off side, usually between cover and third man, with a roughly horizontal bat
  11. to hurt or wound the feelings of (a person), esp by malicious speech or action
  12. (transitive) informal
    to refuse to recognize; snub
  13. (transitive) informal
    to absent oneself from (an activity, location, etc), esp without permission or in haste
    : to cut class
  14. (transitive)
    to abridge, shorten, or edit by excising a part or parts
  15. (transitive)
    often followed by
    down:
    to lower, reduce, or curtail
  16. (transitive)
    to dilute or weaken
  17. (transitive)
    to dissolve or break up
    : to cut fat
  18. when
    intr, followed by across or through:
    to cross or traverse
  19. (intransitive)
    to make a sharp or sudden change in direction; veer
  20. to grow (teeth) through the gums or (of teeth) to appear through the gums
  21. (intransitive)
    to call a halt to a shooting sequence
  22. (followed by to)
    to move quickly to another scene
  23. to edit (film)
  24. (transitive)
    to switch off (a light, car engine, etc)
  25. (transitive)
    (of a performer, recording company, etc) to make (a record or tape of a song, concert, performance, etc)
  26. to divide (the pack) at random into two parts after shuffling
  27. (intransitive)
    to pick cards from a spread pack to decide dealer, partners, etc
  28. (transitive)
    (of a tool) to bite into (an object)
  29. cut both ways
    to have both good and bad effects
  30. to affect both sides of something, as two parties in an argument, etc
  31. cut a dash
    to behave or dress showily or strikingly; make a stylish impression
  32. cut a person dead ⇒ informal
    to ignore a person completely
  33. cut a good figure
    to appear or behave well
  34. cut a poor figure
    to appear or behave badly
  35. cut and run ⇒ informal
    to make a rapid escape
  36. cut it ⇒ slang
    be successful in doing something
  37. cut it fine ⇒ informal
    to allow little margin of time, space, etc
  38. cut loose
    to free or become freed from restraint, custody, anchorage, etc
  39. cut no ice ⇒ informal
    to fail to make an impression
  40. cut one's teeth on ⇒ informal
    to use at an early age or stage
  41. to practise on
adj
  1. detached, divided, or separated by cutting
  2. made, shaped, or fashioned by cutting
  3. reduced or diminished by or as if by cutting
    : cut prices
  4. weakened or diluted
  5. brit

    a slang word for

    drunk
  6. cut and dried ⇒ informal
    settled or arranged in advance
n
  1. the act of cutting
  2. a stroke or incision made by cutting; gash
  3. a piece or part cut off, esp a section of food cut from the whole
    : a cut of meat
  4. the edge of anything cut or sliced
  5. a passage, channel, path, etc, cut or hollowed out
  6. an omission or deletion, esp in a text, film, or play
  7. a reduction in price, salary, etc
  8. a decrease in government finance in a particular department or area, usually leading to a reduction of services, staff numbers, etc
  9. informal
    a portion or share
  10. informal
    a straw, slip of paper, etc, used in drawing lots
  11. the manner or style in which a thing, esp a garment, is cut; fashion
  12. irish informal
    a person's general appearance
    : I didn't like the cut of him
  13. irish derogatory
    a dirty or untidy condition
    : look at the cut of your shoes
  14. a direct route; short cut
  15. the US name for

    block
  16. a stroke made with the bat in a roughly horizontal position
  17. an immediate transition from one shot to the next, brought about by splicing the two shots together
  18. words or an action that hurt another person's feelings
  19. a refusal to recognize an acquaintance; snub
  20. brit
    a stretch of water, esp a canal
  21. a cut above ⇒ informal
    superior (to); better (than)
  22. make the cut
    to better or equal the required score after two rounds in a strokeplay tournament, thus avoiding elimination from the final two rounds
See also

cut across
,
cutback
Etymology: 13th Century: probably of Scandinavian origin; compare Norwegian kutte to cut, Icelandic kuti small knife



Re: re: CUT

Publicado: Jue, 22 Ago 2013 3:59
por E. R. Aristy
Concha Vidal escribió:Fuerte, ¿doloroso? impactante.

Un abrazo siempre.

Gracias querida Concha. Abrazos, ERA